English 216
PROJECT #2: Evaluation
Assignment and Heuristics
The
Assignment
Composing
Schedule:
Heuristics:
10/2, 10/4, 10/9
First Draft: 10/11
Second Draft: 10/16
Polished Draft Due: 10/18
The
Assignment:
In the first
assignment for this class, you chose an issue, you described all the parties
who have a stake in the issue, and you explained how each party conjectures
(depicts) that issue. You then examined the underlying values inherent in
each conjecture. Therefore, you have laid out the groundwork that you need
before you take a position on the issue. You know how each group depicts the
issue (conjectures), and you know what drives them to make that depiction
(values).
Now you have
been asked to become a spokesperson for one of the parties in the debate with
whom you agree. You are going to write an editorial or letter (2-4 pages)
in which you try to persuade one opposing party that you identified in the
first paper to agree with your conjectures about the issue.
Therefore, you
will be arguing as a spokesperson for your party, and will use all the
lines of argument that we have discussed this semester. You must use at
least one claim based on values as well as claims based on facts and reason,
claims based on the heart, and claims based on character. It will be helpful
to review chapters 1-5 and 13-15 in Good Reasons before you begin this
work.
To argue effectively,
you need to not only generate claims for your conjectures, you will also have
to address those claims made by the opposing party you have identified. Then
you will have to show the opposing party why their claims are faulty, based
on less noble values, lack of evidence, and so on. This is called refutation,
and it is an essential part of a persuasive argument.
Goals:
- To persuade
the audience to accept that your conjectures about the issue are reasonable
- To persuade
the audience (without insulting them) that their conjectures are less reasonable
- To convince
the audience to agree with you
Audience
or Readers
Direct your response
to this assignment to one of the other parties involved in the issue whose
thinking you want to influence. Your credibility will be very important in
persuading this audience to adopt your view, so you should take care to present
yourself as someone who is reasonably well informed about the issue you are
discussing. To establish your credibility, you might want to invent a fictional
character for yourself. For example, if you were writing about the issue of
online classes, and you were arguing for a group who believes that online
classes are not the best way to educate young college students, you might
choose to portray yourself as a teacher rather than a student because a teacher
might have more credibility on the issue. Remember that because your audience
may be skeptical or even hostile, you may have to concede some points rather
than just openly attack.
In your introduction,
you will need to convey who this audience is and what has made you write this
article directed to them. In other words, you will invent a rhetorical situation
that explains why you are writing this article. You may be responding to a
real event that has occurred in the news, or you may create an event that
causes you to respond in writing. In either case, you should make that occasion
(reason why you are writing) clear in your introduction.
Arrangement
- Because you
are trying to persuade others to adopt your position, you will probably
need to explain the issue and state your conjectures, then examine the conjectures
and claims made by the opposing party and refute them before you
give reasons (claims) to support your own view. Why? This pattern of examining
the position of others and showing why they are wrong before you give reasons
for your view works better with a hostile audience.
- Likewise,
because you are trying to persuade a hostile audience, you may have to concede
some claims. Another tactic you might employ is to point out what you and
the opposing party have in common. This tactic works especially well with
values, and as you have seen, many times groups share values.
- Since you
are presenting to a hostile audience, you will have to consider how you
open your paper to catch the attention of your readers. This may be where
you experiment with different lines of arguments based on character or arguments
based on the heart. But dont get sloppy and overly emotional. No Hallmark
cards please!
At minimum
The completed
project ought to state unequivocally your conjectures about the issue and
clearly state the competing conjectures of the other party to whom you are
writing. Therefore, you will use some of the material you wrote for Assignment
- Remember to
revise that material when you reuse it please.
- The paper
should explain the values that are at stake in each partys conjectures
and in one of your claims, you will argue that your conjectures are based
on values that are more noble, more honorable, better, more expedient, and
so on.
- To do an effective
job of refutation, you will need to anticipate and examine the claims the
opposing party would use to persuade an audience to accept their conjectures.
To refute the opposing partys claims, consider the types of claims
and the quality of evidence they use. Is the evidence based on fact and
reason, or does it appeal to emotions, appeal to character, or appeal to
values? Are these appeals sufficient? You may have to do additional research
to find developed supporting evidence for your claims and refutation.
- You must use
at least one claim based on values to support your position and one refutation
argument that is also based on values.
This assignment
developed by Dr. S. Crowley, Dr, K. Heenan, & Dr. P. Webb
Heuristics:
Paper #2
- Reread your
draft of Assignment 1 and all the sources you gathered for that assignment.
The virtues most valued by ancient teachers of rhetoric were honor, justice,
goodness, and expediency, In addition, we know that other virtues are historically
important in America, including honesty, sincerity, democracy, freedom,
and equality. We also know that some values have become more important.
We discussed individualism, material comfort, self-fulfillment, and so on.
With these values in mind, answer the following questions:
- Does the
party whose conjecture you most agree with value honor, justice, goodness,
and expediency? Give a specific concrete example of where you see respect
for a particular value operating in this party by writing out the appeal
to that value the party would make.
- Now do the
same for opposing party.
- Give an
example of where you see respect for one of the other values operating
in the party you agree with by writing out the appeal to that value the
party would make.
- Now do the
same for opposing party.
- Ancient teachers
of rhetoric detested injustice, actions that dishonored individuals, families,
or communities, and evil acts; and they were impatient with people who wasted
resources.
- Are these
vices still abhorrent? What are some current examples of any of these
vices?
- Are there
other vices that members of the party you agree with abhor? (Consider
such vices as greed, unfairness, intolerance, self-absorption and so on.
Define two of these vices
- Do you see
any of the vices inherent in the conjectures made by the other party?
Give examples of where they might be practiced. Remember that it is likely
that appeals to vices are more or less hidden by persons who make vicious
arguments.
- Now in a series
of "because" sentences, write out a claim based on each of the
four lines of argument that your party would make. Explain what evidence
you would use (from your sources) to support that claim. Then do the same
for the opposing party. To remind yourself of these lines of argument, look
back at Chapters 1-5 and 13-15 in Good Reasons.
- It is time
to consider the rhetorical situation. You know who your audience is, but
you must now consider why at this point in time you are writing an article
to try and persuade them to accept your conjectures. Consider whether there
are any real events that have occurred that might make you want to write
this article. If no real event has occurred, imagine a fictitious but possible
realistic event that might make you write this article. Then answer the
following questions:
- Which party
involved in the issue do you represent?
- Who are
you as a writer (have you adopted a fictitious role so that you have more
credibility)?
- Who is the
opposing party?
- What real
or imagined event has caused you to write this persuasive article?
- Why do you
feel compelled to write?
- In what
magazine or newspaper would this article be printed?
- Take the claims
you imagined that the opposing party would make. Write them out on a sheet
of paper, and under each claim, explain how you would refute that claim.
Oftentimes, it is useful to figure out the assumptions inherent in each
claim. In other words, what must we accept as true if we are to believe
this claim?