Arizona
State University
English 102: First Year Composition
Hybrid Section |
Summer 2001
8 week session
MW&Online, ECG G324 6:00-8:50
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CL#: 45320 |
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Paper #3: Proposal
In this assignment, you may stay with the same issue or you may choose
another topic.
You will either advocate that something be done or some procedure be
changed or you may argue for or against a policy proposal that has actually
been made. The goal of the assignment is to convince an audience that some
action should or should not be taken in response to a particular situation
or problem.
Composing Schedule:
Drafts: 7/9
Complete Draft Due: 7/13
Background to
Understanding Proposals
In the world of work, proposals are one of the most common forms of
writing. For example, if you want to purchase some new software, you would
write a proposal for your manager arguing for buying that software, showing
him how the software will improve the workplace. Similarly, in the world
of government, people propose new policies for things like welfare reform,
tax reform, and so on. In the world of academia, professors propose new
courses. All of these proposals are unsolicited (that is the writer proposes
the idea). There are also solicited proposals. An organization like the
National Science Foundation puts out a call for proposals for something.
This is called a “Request for Proposals” or RFP. Writers then respond with
a proposal. These can include proposals to study a problem. As you can
see, there are many types of proposals that are written on a daily basis,
so practicing this kind of writing is very useful. All proposals share
one thing in common: they attempt to solve a problem.
Your Assignment
You are going to write either a proposal to change a practice or a
policy proposal. You will choose. Your goal is to write a proposal that
would persuade your audience to act.
In the preceding assignment, you were asked to evaluate an issue. This
assignment asks you now to do something even more difficult: you are asked
advocate that
something be done (or not be done) or to argue that some procedure
be changed. You can argue for or against specific policy proposals that
have actually been made or you can propose (and argue for) a policy suggestion
of your own.
Again, your goal as a writer is to try to convince an audience that
a certain action should or should not be taken in response to a situation
or set of circumstances. Your starting point might well be something that
bothers you and that you feel should be changed. Of course, you might have
to convince your readers that it is a problem for them too, if that is
not obvious. Here are some suggestions:
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Propose an improvement relating to a department, a service, living quarters,
an organization at ASU or in your workplace.
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Propose a method of improving writing/communication skills here at ASU
or at an organization for which you work.
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Propose improvements to dorm policies, admissions policies, or testing
policies at ASU.
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Propose a change in an existing policy or procedure at ASU or at work.
As your textbook points out, you must first establish that the problem
exists. Since not everyone will agree that this is a problem, you will
need to conduct research to find persuasive evidence you can use to prove
that this is a problem. Then you will need to devise a solution and prove
that your solution will solve the problem. In other words, you will need
to prove that your solution is feasible and better than other solutions
that have been proposed. You will also have to consider what opponents
to your solution would argue and show why they are mistaken.
As you work out the rhetorical situation for this assignment, pay particular
attention to the audience for your proposal. You should specify an actual
audience and forum for which you would present the proposal. Consider what
your purpose is---to take action or to create grass roots support for an
action that someone other than the audience would take. Your audience
should be asked either to undertake the action proposed or to support the
action proposed.
Composition
The audience for this paper is the person or people to whom you plan
to make your proposal.
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Your completed response to this assignment should clearly articulate the
policy or practice you are recommending.
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It should review the reasons why change is necessary and demonstrate what
will happen, and to whom, if your recommended policy or practice is adopted.
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It should also demonstrate what would happen, and to whom, if your recommendation
is not adopted.
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It should discuss means of implementation and enforcement of the policy
or procedure you are recommending, as well.
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To be persuasive, you will need research that supports your claims about
the problem, the solution, and the implementation of the solution.
At times, you will be able to find articles that deal with the problem
and solution. At other times, you may have to draw on articles that
deal with analogous problems and solutions.
Essential Elements &
Arrangement
Generally, an unsolicited proposal follows a basic organization pattern
of problem/solution. Here is a list of the features that usually appear
in a proposal from
which you can derive appropriate headings for sections:
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statement and discussion of the problem (includes background and purpose
statement) with a clear and strong proposal claim that connects to the
problem
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demonstration of ways in which the proposal addresses the need or problem
by listing long-term and short-term objectives; that is a discussion of
what any solution must do to solve the problem statement and discussion
of the solution, including:
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a full description of the solution
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an explanation showing how your particular solution solves the problem;
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reasons and evidence to show why the solution will work or be effective
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evidence to show that the solution is feasible, that is the solution can
be carried out given the resources available (funds, personnel, equipment)
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Discussion of opponent’s objections to the solution and refutation
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Discussion of alternative solutions and why those will not work or will
be less effective
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Persuasive conclusion that restates benefits and calls readers to action
Your presentation of all these materials should be as persuasive to your
audience as you can make it.
Invention
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If you are recommending that a policy be implemented, you must compose
it. Find out how similar policies are enacted in similar situations, and
compose a plan for implementing your suggested policy. You should also
determine how the policy you recommend can be enforced.
If you are recommending that some practice be changed, you must first
compose your recommendation. Then find out who can make the changes you
suggest, and find out what procedures must be followed in order to make
the recommended change. Try to find out how your recommended change can
be implemented and enforced, and offer suggestions for achieving this in
your proposal.
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Conduct research using the ASU databases. Find at least 3 articles through
EBSCO or LexusNexus that will help you define the problem and generate
solutions to the problem. Each source must have originally been printed
in a magazine, newspaper, or journal. You may also want to find additional
sources from more scholarly databases (depending on your topic). You may
also use other sources, but be sure to articulate why they are important
and how they help make your point.
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Now you must consider why this problem has not been solved before now and
how your audience will react to your solution. What objections to
your solution will they raise? Will they consider that your solution is
unnecessary, too expensive, too difficult to implement, or not feasible?
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Now you are going to write a full description of the problem that includes
relevant background and has a clear and strong proposal claim that connects
to the problem. You must also discuss short and long term objectives (that
is what any solution must do to solve the problem). When you have written
this description of the problem, write 3 different introductions that would
work with your description of the problem.
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Now you are going to write a complete description of your solution including:
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a full description of the solution
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an explanation showing how your particular solution solves the problem;
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reasons and evidence to show why the solution will work or be effective
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evidence to show that the solution is feasible, that is the solution can
be carried out given the resources available (funds, personnel, equipment)
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Ask the following policy questions of the proposal you will defend:
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Should some action be taken?
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How will proposed actions change the current state of affairs? Or should
the current state affairs remain unchanged?
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How will the proposed changes make things better? Worse? How? In what ways?
For whom?
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Should some state of affairs be regulated (or not) by some formalized procedure?
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Which procedures can be implemented? Which cannot?
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What are the merits of competing proposals? What are their defects?
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How is my proposal better than others? Worse?
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Now write out your answers to the following questions: Given the audience,
time, place, and situation, what actions can I recommend? Will my audience
be receptive to me and to my arguments? Are my recommendations possible
to implement? desirable? Can only part of my recommendation be implemented?
If so, what are my priorities?
If you work through these heuristics carefully, you will have all the material
you need to write an excellent proposal.
This paper prompt was constructed by Katherine
Heenan and Janice
Norton.