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"Though few stanzas from the pen of the Grecian poetess have darted through the shades of oblivion: yet, those that remain are so exquisitely touching and beautiful, that they prove beyond dispute the taste, feeling, and inspiration of the mind which produced them. In examining the curiosities of antiquity, we look to the perfections, and not the magnitude of those relics, which have been preserved amidst the wrecks of time: as the smallest gem that bears the fine touches of a master, surpasses the loftiest fabric reared by the labours of false taste, so the precious fragments of the immortal Sappho, will be admired, when the voluminous productions of inferior poets are mouldered into dust."
--Mary Robinson, Sappho and Phaon. «
Rachel Wetzsteon provides a great example of a contemporary anecdote on Sapphics in her article, "Marvelous Sapphics."
Marvellous Sapphics --Rachel Wetzsteon
I would like to tell you about a lovely stanza form I've long been an ardent fan of: it was conjured up in a simpler time by Classical Sappho.
This stanza, as you can see, is composed of four lines. The first three lines, 11 syllables long, are called hendecasyllabics; the last line, only five syllables, has a name that seems designed to make up for its diminutive status: the adonic. In addition to its strict syllable count, the stanza also has a very particular meter: in the first three lines, two trochees, followed by a dactyl, followed by two more trochees; in the last, one dactyl and one trochee. «
The following poems are samples of three variations of the Sapphic form provided by Jan Haag from her web site at the University of Washington. She has written in 333 different forms, so check out her web page sometime for contemporary examples of the most obscure forms: http://students.washington.edu/jhaag/POpoetry.html
#121 ADONIC, SAPPHICS 4-12-98
Sun's rise, moon's set, rain's wild lees, dew drops, sea's calm -- where will thunder rumble to fall from lightning skies and shake the earth's mild desire to rest in characteristic
bliss, untroubled, blameless, quite still in green, blue atmosphere, clouds, winds with its longing known, lost? Come again pale star, ride across the world's bright imagination.
Creatures, blue born, immanent, doomed to walk, die deviant from stars structure. Pre-set cyclones, grace of energized planet's, spinning past fired Cassiopeia,
bow to Ma Andromeda, cater wishes, transit hopes, fears, all strange sighs, boundless echoes clean of substance, dazzlingly, gifted, garnished habitably.
#295 SAPPHIC AEOLIC PATTERN (after Cowper "Lines Written During a Period of Insanity" 1774) 10-4-98
Shriek, O my soul with silent pain, disturb not sleep, nor let rain run down upon the fountain stilled by the drying waters, flowers scentless, withered, soon dying.
Cry at the sky, and weep for spring, which comes not; Autumn, too, passes color lest we fall sad. Memories fade. The night, the shade will wrap us. Fortunate light falls.
Blackness in space will answer suns' cooled dying beams as the drumming God begins his dancing. Once more, again, his feet will lift the lightning past the small heart's fear.
Shiva! O Shiva your delight will weaken hopes left and hopes to seek beyond effulgence. Nothing remains but light consumed in darkness. Great is the Goddess.
Radiant Shakti, dance! O Shakti dance with Shiva because you are the light! And bringing Shiva to climax creates the world, the light in night, all of nothing.
#194 SAPPHIC LINE 6-17-98
Jonquil came to me in a dream of fragrance like the spring: fresh, young as the rain that falls free from the sunshine sky. With her bobbing head held
high to catch the wind in its pure unscented dash across the land, choosing her life so wet, wild, yellow, prototype for the sun. Ah how brief
stays the sun in orbit among the lasting stars, the black night, empty, eternal space, not fully born, and not yet allowed to darken.
Hued like Jonquil's hair, does it gain with age or death? When will we know and/or cease to long for answers filamented as fine as frayed threads.
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